Wikipedia:Peer review/FutureSex/LoveSounds/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to know what can be improved on it and especially how it can be made suitable for the featured article criteria. I feel there are numerous problems with the article but would like to know if anyone else feels this way.
Thank you, StephenBHedges (talk) 19:53, 15 July 2009 (UTC)
Comments from TechOutsider
Ok, I've heard of this album before, listened to exactly one song on it, so sorta have a strangers perspective to this album. I hope I bring a fresh perspective to this article. Minor things I may fix myself.
- Should it be "released by", not "released on"?
- "took place during", should it be "took place from"?
- Wikilink "hiatus"
- "succeeded expectations"; what were the expectations?
- "and spawned"; I believe "Cry Me a River" spawned from Justified itself.
- A lot of adjectives; be sure those adjectives can be justified by a reference. Don't pull words out of your mind to describe a situation.
Looked at your pictures and media rationales, they checked out. I forgot to check the article class before this review, and the prose surprised me while reading. I pulled up the discussion page and found it was GA-class, no wonder. If the editors actively involved in this article are willing to take it to FA-class, I believe that is a) possible and b) easily feasible. Good luck. TechOutsider (talk • contribs) 21:11, 19 July 2009 (UTC)