Wikipedia:Peer review/French names/archive1
I wonder if this is clear for non-French-speaking people.
OK - here we go!
- You need two paragraphs for an intro, see WP:LEAD
- Grammer needs work
- One-sentence paragraphs
- Paragraphs too short
- "Madame, Mademoiselle, Monsieur" - could use a better title, plus you may not need the list there
- "Origins" - would be better to explain rather than the list here
- External link or two - probably hard to find so certainly not neccesary
Thanks, take care! Ryan Norton T | @ | C 09:50, 30 September 2005 (UTC)
More references; give us some idea of how usage has evolved; how does French usage of names/titles reflect French cultural/social/political values? How is it distinctive in relation to selected other languages? Is there regional variation, within France and in non-metropolitan speech communities, such as Quebec, Belgium, Switzerland? Has the Academie Francais had a role? More images? Tony 13:22, 30 September 2005 (UTC)