Wikipedia:Peer review/Final Fantasy IX/archive1

Final Fantasy IX

This article is going to be an FA soon. I believe this article is one of the best of Wikipedia in my honest opinion. Any comments here to improve this article is appreciated. Thanks. Sjones23 21:39, 17 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 14 is messed up. Wrad 21:43, 17 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed. — Deckill er 00:07, 18 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Anyone who wants to copy-edit the article should do so. — Deckill er 00:07, 18 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I notice that the screenshots claim "This is a web-resolution image" as part of their fair-use rationale, even though most of them are 1280x800. Anomie 00:50, 18 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed. — Deckill er 01:11, 18 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Plans for a merchandise section? --Teggles 05:35, 18 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm not sure. It's usually been added as "extra", but I think a couple sentences can be added to that second-to-last paragraph in development, which covers ads and merchandise. — Deckill er 10:51, 18 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I know I wrote this myself (shame on me), but this is a really awkward sentence in the audio section: "and incorporated ideas such as "the old intro for battle music" and arranged the Volcano theme from Final Fantasy and the Pandemonium theme from Final Fantasy II." --Teggles 04:41, 20 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- Yeah, hopefully we'll get a couple people to give it a pass before I FAC it tomorrow/Thursday (ideally Thursday, since tomorrow is going to be a Day From Hell). — Deckill er 04:44, 20 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]