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Fiasco (role-playing game)

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I've listed this article for peer review because I think it's on the way to Good Article status - but if so it will be my first contender for a GA, so I'd like guidance from more experienced editors please. There's a general issue (I think the whole thing is in line with the Manual of Style - but as I said, I'm inexperienced), I'm not entirely sure how to handle the game mechanics (by analogy to WP:FICTION has been my best guess), and there's a paragraph on the history of the game that I believe is interesting and relevant but has only been sourced by a blog interview, a forum, and a Reddit AMA (all primary sources) - secondary sources don't appear present for this paragraph.

Edit I'm not looking for specialist knowledge (not that that's a request to not have any although given I go into some technical detail, how clear the system explanation is would be useful please). I'm pretty sure of my facts - I'm just not at all sure of my Wiki or what it would take in practice to reach either B class or (preferably) GA even if I know the theory. And I'm not sure there is enough to the subject to make FA a possibility in practice or what that would take. (Yes, I've read the documentation, but this is my first attempt to use it).

Thanks, Neonchameleon (talk) 09:45, 19 December 2013 (UTC)