Wikipedia:Peer review/European Golden Shoe/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I feel the list has improved a lot, I would like to know whether I should go for FL, as it is essentially a list, and is in a list category. Thank you for your time NapHit (talk) 16:44, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
[edit]- "in all the top " - in all of the top or in all top...
- "Soulier d'Or" - translate.
- "or the spring-fall season before in relevant countries" not clear to non-experts. Plus should we not use "autumn" as "fall" is very US-English.
- "because of suspect scoring sprees in Cyprus." this needs expansion and citation. I don't understand what it means at all.
- "of which France Football is part of" - no need for last "of", and what is the relevance of France Football; indeed, what is France Football?
- "which is weighted according to the relative strength of each of Europe's leagues" - this probably needs to be expanded, perhaps highlighting the range extremes, so strongest league (serie A perhaps?) has higher weighting than, say, Cyprus league?
- "golden boot twice" - Golden Boot twice.
- " the amount of games" - number of games.
- Hugo Sanchez's notes box isn't rendering correctly (I'm using Safari on Mac OS 10.5)
- If you use rowspan or colspan, it tends to mess up sorting (try it - it goes bananas).
- Rather than Country, I'd identify the League in which the top scorer was playing.
- "Pancev affair" again, this should be expanded upon in the text rather than be consigned to a footnote.
- Zviad Endeladze deserves an article, albeit a stub!
- Arsen Avetisyan's final column isn't rendering properly.
- Henry/Forlan final column isn't rendering correctly either. Plus similar problems with sorting and colspans etc.
- "France Football decide to " - decided?
- Fill in the {{Cite web}}s completely, including
accessdate= - Use the Category:Football (soccer) in Europe category instead of the sport in europe cat.
Hope these are useful. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:22, 24 February 2008 (UTC)