Wikipedia:Peer review/Euphoria (American TV series)/archive2
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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like for the article to be more refined before it becomes a FAC.
Thanks, elijahpepe@wikipedia (he/him) 03:00, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
- STANDARD NOTE: I have added this PR to the Template:FAC peer review sidebar to get quicker and more responses. When this PR is closed, please remove it from the list. Also, consider adding the sidebar to your userpage to help others discover pre-FAC PRs, and please review other articles in that template.
- Since you are still working towards your first successful FAC, I suggest seeking a mentor who can help provide feedback on the article. Posting on various applicable Wikiprojects for help will also solicit comments. I also suggest that you review FACs right now: this will allow you to get to know the FAC process and criteria, as well as build confidence among the FAC community that you understand the criteria. Thanks, Z1720 (talk) 14:11, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Drive-by-comments by LM150
[edit]- Having recently watched this series.. the article definitely needs a plot/summary
- Needs more analysis/discussion on themes. From drugs, gender, sexuality, pornography, hookup/dating culture, violence, dysfunctional childhoods.. the list goes on and on!
- Needs more discussion on cinematography etc, eg. I found that the series had a retro/vintage 1980s vibe all over it
- Soundtrack section may need cleanup - there's quite a lot of tables/infoboxes. Same with the ratings section - LM150 18:21, 8 July 2022 (UTC)
- @ElijahPepe: to let them know about the above. Z1720 (talk) 23:49, 6 August 2022 (UTC)