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I have exhaustively researched the subject of this article and am trying to get it ready for FA status. I would appreciate comments on prose, comprehensiveness, and any other issues you spot.

Thanks, Laser brain (talk) 04:01, 3 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I've never done a peer review, so sorry if this isn't the right format.

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Factoids I found
  • Elderly was a sponsor of Michigan's 2001 National Folk Festival.[1] [2]
  • There's a video here.[3]
  • Elderly is a dealer of Deering banjos [4]
  • Elderly sells or sold bodhráns [5]

--Edibility (talk) 14:36, 3 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I've addressed most of these issues except as noted above - thanks very much! --Laser brain (talk) 14:37, 5 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]