Wikipedia:Peer review/E.V.O.: Search for Eden/archive1

E.V.O.: Search for Eden

Planning on elevating to featured article status, so I need some advice on what to add, delete or change. - A Link to the Past (talk) 00:18, 21 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Wow, I'd completely forgotten about this game, but I remember playing it all the time. The article needs a better lead section. There are some problems -- There are also three types of crystals. Yellow crystals give tips and reveal points of the story. These have not been listed here. -- except you just did, I know that's not what you meant, but that's what it says, also it says there are three crystals and then describes four. There's at least one sentence in second person (Your character has two basic moves). This article says a lot about what happens during the game, but doesn't mention sales, reviews, legacy (are there any other games with evolution as a central theme?). Also, there's no references section. Are there any external links that would be relevant? Forums or strategy guides or anything? Tuf-Kat 04:16, 21 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, when I expanded this article into full, I took a lot from a walkthrough that I wrote for a friend of mine years ago... I should really go over it with a fine-toothed comb... I think that would clear up a lot of the quality and consistency issues... as for other things, I think we should add more screen captures and place them on the left side, or the middle, or just not on the right side... as for other things... I'm not sure, I'll have to think about it... although I think it'd be great to get an underdog on the front page. Canadian Paul 04:06, 22 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]