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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to see how the article could be improved. (I am skeptical this could even become a good article).
Thanks, Davest3r08 >:) (talk) 21:53, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720
[edit]Comments after a quick skim:
- The orange banner at the top of "History" needs to be resolved, as do the citation needed templates.
- Split up the History section using level 3 headings.
- Ref 40 should not be in all caps, per MOS:ALLCAPS
- Suggest archiving the references using IA Bot
- If you need more sources, I suggest using Google, WP:LIBRARY or your local library system.
I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 00:06, 20 November 2023 (UTC)
Editors can only have one PR open at a time. Since you have one open for We Are Family (song), I am going to close this one. Z1720 (talk) 01:40, 24 November 2023 (UTC)