The first sentence probably shouldn't be a separate paragraph, as it looks quite strange and is very much related to the information given in the second paragraph.
Done
"The ground the parish sits on sedimentary, but of varying types." Typo here?
Done. The ground the parish sits on is sedimentary, but of varying types.
The Bolton Abbey Railway Station should be mentioned somewhere outside the lead (or at the very least, have a citation).
Done; I've put it in "Geography", which seems a little weird; I'll spin it out into a "Transport" section.
Heritage
"There are several listed buildings in the parish of Draughton, including buildings and boundary stones." I don't think it would hurt to go into a little bit more detail about what the buildings are, something along the lines of "...including several houses and the Flat Bridge..."
Done
The hatnote could probably be replaced by linking to the page in the body directly.
Done
Health
That kinda weird short sentence at the start could be maybe fixed by writing instead "In 2022, disinfection measures were temporarily introduced to a water treatment plant near Draughton..."
Done