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I've listed this article for peer review because so many content has been added since it was reviewed that I want to make sure that the prose quality and sources are good.
Thanks, Saulo Talk to Me 16:39, 5 April 2012 (UTC)
Comments
- " After meeting up with..." not keen on the "up" here, I understand it's typical American English but I think it's entirely redundant.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "Spears recorded the singer recorded " eh?
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "Additional songwriting was done by " yuck on the "was done by", clumsy phrase.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "The teen-pop ballad, speaks of a " no need for the comma.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "a similar sound to " -> "a sound similar to"
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "said to be miffed at " miffed -> annoyed. Or put "miffed" in quotes.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "Oops!...I Did It Again" is missing a space after the ellipsis.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- Don't think you need to link Sweden and Switzerland, very common geographical terms...
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "writing was done by his " same again.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- Is it "Robert Lange", "Lange" or "Mutt Lange"? All are correct but I suggest you stick with one in the prose.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "seconds.[8][3]" put refs in order.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "that the "Eagles-esque chorus" worth linking Eagles here I think.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "Barnes and Noble" should really be "Barnes & Noble".
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "on the last week " surely "in" the last week?
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "March 2, 2001.[30][19] " put refs in order.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "time, Justin Timberlake[26][27]." put refs after the full stop.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "Spears performing "Don't Let Me Be the Last to Know" on 2011's Femme Fatale Tour." no full stop required.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "she is seen on a tree where " you really don't need to link tree here.
- Lol sorry! Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "and a guy from " a little colloquial.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- "broadcasting done by American " again, "done" is clumsy.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- Weekly charts table is out of order to start with (the Belgian charts switch when you sort by chart name).
- They switch because one is Ultratop 40 and the other is Ultratop 50. - Saulo Talk to Me 11:46, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- Year-end and Certifications tables really don't need to be sortable with a single entry in each.
- Ref 6 has a spaced hyphen in the title, should be an en-dash per WP:DASH.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:46, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- Be consistent with the spacing after the ... in reference titles featuring Oops!... I did it again!
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
- Refs 18, 20, 25, 34, 35 need an en-dash.
- Fixed - Saulo Talk to Me 11:46, 15 May 2012 (UTC)
The Rambling Man (talk) 10:02, 11 April 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry it took me so long. - Saulo Talk to Me 11:40, 15 May 2012 (UTC)