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I've listed this article for peer review because… it has been nominated for FA without a peer review. Thanks, --Redtigerxyz 12:46, 20 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Ilse@

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About the lead section:

  • Too many brackets in the first paragraph of the lead. Consider moving the translations/explanations to another location.
  • Remove the quotes from the lead that are not in the article. The lead is supposed to be a summary of the article.
  • Please read Wikipedia:Lead section for more information.

Ilse@ 22:32, 21 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. The entire lead section has been redone.--Sankarrukku 06:56, 23 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

A few more suggestions about the lead:
Ilse@ 07:46, 23 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]