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Denis Law

I've done a lot of work on this article and would like to get it to featured article status. I've gone through the style guidelines and made it conform to them as best I can but I'm still quite new here so I've probably missed something. Any help would be welcome, but I'd especially appreciate comments from people who either aren't British or aren't interested in football, to get an idea of how readable it is to them.

I'm going to start looking for some images to add, but if anyone knows any good sources of non-copyrighted football images, please let me know. Thanks, CTOAGN 14:43, 25 Jun 2005 (UTC)

• Some basic things that I would expect from a biography are missing, is or was he married, did he have children. I'd also like to know a bit more about his role in the 1974 World Cup. The lead should be expanded to 2 or three paragraphs to summarise the whole article. You will probably have trouble getting non-copyrighted images, you may be able to use some under the provision of fair use, if you're local a picture of the statue would be a nice addition --nixie 23:02, 26 Jun 2005 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the feedback. I've made a start on the changes you suggested and will post here when they're done. CTOAGN 30 June 2005 13:31 (UTC)
  • I've done this now. Sorry it took so long, my computer died so I've had to work on someone else's. CTOAGN 9 July 2005 15:05 (UTC)

Does anyone have any final suggestions before this drops off the page? I'm intending to put it into FAC as soon as I can get some images, so any opinions on whether it's ready or not would be very useful. CTOAGN 15:08, 20 July 2005 (UTC)