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Dean Smith

I was interested in getting comments on what would be needed to get the Dean Smith article up to featured status. I know I need to delete the trivia section and remove the other lists. So any other help would be appreciated. Remember 17:29, 29 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

One thing that I notice on a cursory inspection is the lead. It is both too long, and a bit disorganized. If it were more chronological, I think it would be easier to follow. MLilburne 17:53, 29 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, I'll look into revising that.Remember 20:26, 29 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 23:00, 29 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]