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I am fairly new to the whole peer review process, so please bear with me :D

I would like feedback in the following areas:

  1. Overall appearance and layout
  2. Are there enough citations and references?
  3. What does this article need to qualify for Featured Article status?

Thanks to everyone who contributes to this peer review. I look forward to reading your feedback. I have contributed somewhat to this article, but I can only take credit for about 1% of the content. Em3rald 11:00, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I think that the paragraph about the Dead Sea in different languages should go to a seperate (maybe first) section. Green caterpillar 13:59, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
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  • As Andy suggests, it can be improved by removing excessive links to solitary years. It also contains a date formatting error. Fixing this is easy with a single click on a 'dates' tab in edit mode. You can then accept or reject the changes offered and/or do more editing before pressing 'Save'. Simply copy the entire contents of User:Bobblewik/monobook.js to your own monobook. Then follow the instructions in your monobook to clear the cache (i.e. press Ctrl-Shift-R in Firefox, or Ctrl-F5 in IE) before it will work. bobblewik 16:53, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
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