Wikipedia:Peer review/Cuisine of the Thirteen Colonies/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to nominate it for FA status, but want to make sure it fits the standards according to other editors.
Thanks, Chef Tanner (talk) 21:39, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
Comments from Dtbohrer
- "though British settlers had lived in Virginia, along the James River, since 1608" - seems redundant, the sentence already says that British has come before these particular British
- a wikilink for "pease porridge" would be helpful
- "almost daily dish in the Delaware Valley and cook books specialized in puddings and dumplings" - the sentence sounds like a run-on
- I suggest: "almost daily dish in the Delaware Valley. Local cookbooks also specialized in puddings and dumplings." (I always thought "cookbook" was one word)
- Overlinking of common terms
- some of the images don't use the default thumbnail setting
- the location of the "backcountry" is a little vague
- "due to the vast amounts of ships and artillery entering the ocean waters" - Why did this cause a decline in lobster population?
Interesting article, I did always wondered where scrapple came from. I can add more comments, if they're needed. --D.B.talk•contribs 04:35, 11 December 2008 (UTC)