Wikipedia:Peer review/Corinthian War/archive1
A complex and little known subject, but I think this does a good job of covering it. I'm heading in the direction of FAC with it; any suggestions? RobthTalk 14:51, 27 March 2006 (UTC)
- It would be very helpful if the article included a map that showed the position of all the various states, cities and battles mentioned. For example, I didn't see either Locris or Phocis on the map that is situated right next to the same section of text. The page could also use some more graphics to help provide visual interest. I found a couple of seemingly misplaced commas a bit disconcerting: "Corinth and Thebes, refused to send troops to assist...", "In the years, following the signing of the..." Thanks! — RJH 16:23, 29 March 2006 (UTC)
- Yes, map is much needed, as well as more graphics (soldiers from that era, commanders, anything would be nice).--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 04:16, 1 April 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks for the comments. I'm in the process of looking for a better map--I may have to get someone to create one. I may be able to get some other good images, depending on what I find out about the copyright status of photos of Greek vase paintings. In any event I'll keep looking. RobthTalk 23:48, 1 April 2006 (UTC)