Wikipedia:Peer review/Coonskin (film)/archive1
Alright- how'd I do? (Ibaranoff24 23:04, 14 July 2006 (UTC))
- Its very good for an obscure film. All the images need fair use rationale, and the image gallery should be removed as its extraneous copyrighted material. The first sentence needs to be rewritten; it may be uncommon but I don't think its "unqiue" to combine live action and animation and "for adults only" should be removed. At least rewrite it to say its an "adult film". The word "recently" (with clasified as a cult film) and "young" (with Al Sharpton) should be removed as those are time sensitive words. The only other issue I had is with the long Roger Ebert sentence in parenthesis in the intro. It would best if that was turned into its own seperate sentence. Good work. Medvedenko 06:06, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
- Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 15:39, 21 July 2006 (UTC)