Wikipedia:Peer review/Cindy (dolphin)/archive1
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Aiming for FA standard. A withdrawn FAC mentioned prose quality as one issue. Andjam 22:47, 16 September 2006 (UTC)
- It is, I feel, way too short to be a FA. It needs a photo, and the tone is a bit odd. On the plus side, it's exhaustively referenced. Lankiveil 00:14, 17 September 2006 (UTC).
- Can you clarify what you mean about the tone? Andjam 00:40, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
- It read very amateurishly, not like what you'd find in an encyclopaedia at all. It's much better now, however. Lankiveil 11:25, 18 September 2006 (UTC).
- Can you clarify what you mean about the tone? Andjam 00:40, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
- Long way to go, you need a lot more prose to even make it for GA. - Mailer Diablo 04:01, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
- Formatted to help, please expand the sections that seem weak or small. Also, this article is about this dolphin or its marriage? You should add tons of non-marriage information about the dolphin to the article. What does it look like? How is it treated? Judgesurreal777 05:17, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
- A marriage is not just the wedding ceremony. In what sense was she married? Did she visit it, have sex with it, consider its children hers, what? Dev920 19:36, 22 September 2006 (UTC)
- Has some way to go. Provide some more details on the actual dolphin not just the marriage (its weight, personality and any distinctive marks it may have). Expand the one or two sentence sections and also expand the lead. Provide more quotes from Tendler. Provide the scientific name of the subspecies in brackets (T. truncatus ponticus, I believe). Provide a photo of the dolphin. Cedars 00:41, 1 October 2006 (UTC)
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per WP:MOS-L and WP:CONTEXT.
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- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at WP:GTL.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged.
- There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that the it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 2a. [4]
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 14:30, 13 October 2006 (UTC)
- P.S. The footnotes can be found here for now. Ruhrfisch 14:59, 13 October 2006 (UTC)