Wikipedia:Peer review/Chicken soup/archive1

Chicken soup

I've made a lot of changes to this article recently. I nominated it for featured article (yes, I know, probably should have listed it here before doing that), and made changes in response to some of the comments raised by the nomination. I'd like to get some feedback as to how the article could still be improved - even better, see some more people editing it. Thanks. See also: Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Chicken soup/archive1 --Woggly 14:53, 20 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Woggly - most of the stuff I'd say is already said in the FAC nom - pay special attention to the structure mentions... Ryan Norton ^{T | @ | C} 02:30, 22 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Shouldn't be on PR and FAC lists simultaneously. Tony 02:34, 22 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Quite observant - I removed it from FAC. Looks like Woggly needs help so I'll try to remember to comment more later... Ryan Norton ^{T | @ | C} 02:36, 22 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Interesting. It goes a bit heavy on the Jewish side of it, beware of NPOV (although you've done well so far). However, there simply isn't enough meat (excuse the pun) the make this FA. Yet. HereToHelp 18:43, 22 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]