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Cello

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A few minor quibbles from someone not very familar with the instrument:

• Boxwood is a disambiguation page, which specific wood does the article refer to?
• Schoenberg, another disambiguation page
• "An average cello bow is 73 cm long (shorter than a violin or viola bow) 3 cm high (from the frog to the stick)" The definition of "frog" should be here (currently it is explained in a later paragraph)
• There are no references past the "Development" section; this is one thing that definately needs fixing before a Featured Article Nomination.

That is all, good article! -RunningOnBrains 18:54, 15 February 2008 (UTC)