Wikipedia:Peer review/Carmen/archive1

Carmen

I believe that I have fully expanded several sections on this page, but I realise that it needs pictures and production & recording info. Other than that, are there any other issues? --Alexs letterbox 07:17, 18 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I can see several problems with this article from just skimming it. There is far too little information on "Musical elements" and "Dramatic elements". The order of the sections, in my opinion, needs to be sorted out: plot synposes before track "Musical numbers". A further problem is the title formatting, only the first letter of the first word should be capitalised, unless it is a proper noun. Good luck, Oldak Quill 13:24, 18 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I hope that one day your taste for music will become more ... uh ... refined ... and ... once your favorite piano composer is no longer Gershwin (a very interesting composer, to be sure) but Chopin, you will revisit the Carmen article, if only for fun. Oh, and - one cannot debouch a libretto; therefore a libretto cannot be debouched. Ricardo the Texan 03:02, 21 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]