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Cúcuta

I want to make Cúcuta a featured article, could you please send me suggestions to improve it?

--Ricardocolombia 21:36, 9 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Improve the prose, especially in the History section:

All the places where have been preserved. -this doesn't make any sense
Juana Rangel de Cuellar donated 782 hectares to the founding of the site, at the centre of which was a church around which a village grew, at a considerable rate due to being well-sited for commerce. - run-on sentence
The combatants were 400 men under the control... - The combatants included 400 men under the control ...
This branch wasn't built due econocimic problems. - spelling/grammar
I have found at least 2 more examples of problem prose, and I just finished History. I would suggest asking the League of Copyeditors to copyedit it for you. Mr.Z-mantalk 21:46, 9 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 21:47, 10 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

In the history section, this needs clarifying: "Although the victory was not strategically important, it boosted the morale of Bolivar's forces to free to Venezuela." Did you mean "to free Venezuela"? -Malkinann 06:10, 21 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]