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Brown County State Park

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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to improve it to GA. This is Indiana's largest state park, and it deserves better than Start-Class.

Thanks, TwoScars (talk) 17:12, 28 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I have little experience with Geography articles, but in the assumption that every tiny bit might help:

Comments (having stumbled here from my Peer Review)

NOTE: Please respond, below all my comments, and not interspersed throughout, thanks!
Generally very, very good looking - neat structure, well cited and beautifully illustrated. In my humble opinion, the article class can easily jump to B-class and GA is within close reach.
Credit to whom it is due, nice pictures by Diego Delso, but there is not really a need to mention him below the pictures.
Tiny detail: I would use the larger dash (–) between numbers or years, and small dash (-) within words.
Below the heading "Activities" I would write a summarizing sentence mentioning that the park allows for mountain biking, fishing, hiking and horse riding.

Great job so far and good luck! Please also take a look at my Peer Review, Kareldorado (talk) 20:02, 29 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much for looking at the Brown County State Park article. I will make the suggested changes (4 and 5) on Saturday when I have more time. For item number 3: one of the conditions for using the pictures by Diego Delso is that he must be credited. I am not a fan of using pictures where the author must be credited, but his pictures were the best—and I now live too far away to take my own pictures. If you are certain that I do not need to credit him, please confirm that.TwoScars (talk) 12:46, 30 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]