Wikipedia:Peer review/Blue Velvet/archive1
I would like to get this article in shape to reach GA status and would like any constructive criticism, comments, suggestions, etc. to improve it. Thanks! Count Ringworm 20:19, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
- Again, take it to film peer review. Daniel Case 17:52, 7 March 2007 (UTC)
A few thoughts:
- Last sentence, first paragraph of the lead section seems awkward. Could this be broken into two sentences?
- There are several tags in the article that need to be addressed. The synopsis in particular seems far too detailed. The "Direction" section is completely lacking in citations.
- Numerous dashes need to be replaced with em-dashes.
- How well was the film received overseas?
- Thanks. — RJH (talk) 20:50, 12 March 2007 (UTC)