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Bipasha Basu

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I've listed this article for peer review because…I want help with developing the article further and raising it to GA status.

Thanks, Srin ivas 11:43, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Here is my quick take -

Intro and Early life sections (and some others, but these are the worst) are lacking in grammar and punctuation.
Debut section starts off with a ref to another section, does not stand by itself. Whole first para really confusing. No source for Consenting Adults.
Film career section seems very complete; did not read it all yet.
Many citations lack publisher data and dates. A few of the sources may not be considered reliable.
It could use sections about off-scrceen work.

BollyJeff || talk 21:16, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Everything else can be fixed. But as far as off-screen work is considered, we hardly have anything to talk of. Srin ivas 16:30, 12 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]