Wikipedia:Peer review/Battle of San Jacinto/archive1
For a battle that essentially determined the size of the United States and Mexico, and led to the United States/Mexican War, this article needs rewriting, and then broken down into sections, such as Events leading to the Texas War of Independance; The Alamo and Goliad; The Long March; The Battle; The Aftermath; (years as an indenpendant country, what annexation by the US provoked in Mexico). Just thoughts. Once again, this is an article that after the millitary coordinator elections, needs attending to. old windy bear 13:19, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
- Your rundown of the article's current problems appears to be essentially correct, missing only the complete lack of references. Based on your comments it appears that you are looking for people to assist in researching and writing the article instead of just for comments on how the article may be improved. This is a task that Wikipedia:Peer review was not built for. I would recommend that you take this request to Wikipedia:Texan Collaboration of the Month instead, as the Texas contingent of Wikipedia is the group most likely to assist you in this effort. Other places that may also be able to help are Wikipedia:Pages needing attention, Wikipedia:Requests for expansion, Wikipedia:Mexico Collaboration, Wikipedia:U.S. Wikipedians' notice board/USCOTW, and Wikipedia:Article Improvement Drive. Good luck in your efforts to find people interested in working on this topic. --Allen3 talk 15:23, 31 January 2006 (UTC)
- And of course a reference section (inline references preferably) is needed.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 21:05, 2 February 2006 (UTC)