Wikipedia:Peer review/Apple Hill Center for Chamber Music/archive1

Apple Hill Center for Chamber Music

My first sizable article, so figured I'd submit it for review to see if my style or anything needs work. Thanks. --YixilTesiphon ^{Say hello}_{Be shallow} 03:34, 22 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

It looks quite good, but you'll need to cite your sources. Also, I feel that a picture of the Center itself (instead of the view you get when you're in it) would be helpful. I've remedied some minor style issues, such as the Unneeded Capitalization In Section Headings (you might want to consult the Manual of Style). — mark ✎ 11:12, 22 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Is the link to the Center's page at the bottom, from which I derived all the information, not enough of a citation? All the little numbers would link to it, so it seems that citations would simply make the article harder to read. Also, I don't have a picture of the Center itself, though I agree it would be more helpful.--YixilTesiphon ^{Say hello}_{Be shallow} 14:59, 22 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Also, all the section headings are proper nouns (Playing for Peace is the name of the program, Apple Hill Chamber Players is the name of the group, and Summer Festival is referred to as a proper noun, as can be seen from the website, so I reverted your changes to the section headings. --YixilTesiphon ^{Say hello}_{Be shallow} 15:06, 22 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]