Wikipedia:Peer review/Always Be My Baby/archive1
Probably my second-favourite song of all time. I'd really like to promote this article to WP:FA, and welcome any suggestions, comments, and objections. Please note that the images are not registered under the fair use criteria. —Eternal Equinox | talk 23:30, 6 March 2006 (UTC)
Hi, interesting subject. Some copyedits are needed:
- "ABMB is a song by Mariah Carey for her sixth album is missing a verb ("performed by" on her sixth) or "co-written" or something.
- "The mid-tempo pop number describes her handling a breakup well" ("describes her handling of a breakup" might be better)
- "as she knows that although" is awkward, drop the although
- "she and her ex" I think "ex" is slang, is there a better word?
- Unlike its predecessors, "Fantasy" and "One Sweet Day", (add "which debuted at number one, ABMB debuted at number two and ascended after four weeks, staying at number one for two weeks.
- You might add more information about the chart stay and position into the intro if this is a notable part of song's history.
Hope this helps, Kaisershatner 15:49, 8 March 2006 (UTC)