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Accelerated Math

Please improve the language of the article so that it is more neutral, without significantly modifying its factual content. For example, the section on Reports may need language cleanup to sound less like an advertisement. Thanks! Chris53516 17:34, 21 June 2006 (UTC)

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• Thanks, Andy _t 20:05, 21 June 2006 (UTC)

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