Wikipedia:Peer review/2006 Asian Games/archive1

2006 Asian Games

I've listed this article for peer review because i want to improve to good article standard or even featured article standard. The article is well written, but i think it still have space to be improve, and i also want to know how to write a long lead section in this article.

Thanks,

Aleenf1 09:08, 24 August 2007 (UTC)

• I think the sections about the opening and closing ceremonies were overly long and excessively detailed. Consider shortening those a little. I also doubt the necessity to include all the countries in which the Games were broadcasted.
• Consider expanding the section on the highlights of the Games.

• ...many believed that the organisers did not have plans to deal with it...

  Citation needed.

• Sources say there were only so many buses, which were quickly filled...

  Citation needed.

• Many volunteers have been complaining about the lack of transportation needed to take them to their locations...

  Citation needed.

Otherwise, I think you have done good work thus far.DrWeetAls 10:37, 28 August 2007 (UTC)