Wikipedia:Intensive Care Unit/Cycle of poverty
This article has been around for a while but could use some intervention and cleanup. Itsmejudith (talk) 21:25, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
I've replaced two paragraphs in the article which made unsupported assertions of a general nature and which had been challenged with {{fact}} tags with two other too-wordy paragraphs which make more specific assertions and which are supported by cited sources. I'm not sure how much of an improvement this is, but perhaps in this case change will stimulate improvement. -- Boracay Bill (talk) 04:02, 5 January 2008 (UTC)