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Result pending

Article has gotten out of hand since 2012 promotion.

  • WP:TOOBIG concerns, article is 227,901 bytes and needs some trimming.
  • Lots of cases where several sentences in a row begin with "In (year), blah blah happened." over and over, so a copy edit is needed.
  • "Service Plaza" sub-header has several one-sentence paragraphs and excessive detail, along with more cases of several sentences in a row beginning with "In (year)".
  • Had an "in popular culture" section of trivial tangential name-drops, which I snipped out.
  • External links seem excessive.
  • PA Highways site tagged as unreliable self-published source.

Ten Pound Hammer(What did I screw up now?) 01:20, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]