Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Elaine Marley/1
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- Result: Most of the content was removed mostly by a user, which was all reverted after figuring it out it that all of the content was removed. GreenishPickle! (🔔) 09:09, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
Article needs to be updated. Some statements at Concept and design section were unsourced and should be expanded a bit if found more. The reception section also needs to be expanded from scholarly books/sources and should be cleaned up all the trivial listicles that doesn't have valuable commentary to the character. GreenishPickle! (🔔) 12:22, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
- Keep I don't particularly see a problem with the article's content or writing style. I have to ask if the problem is just a few listicles being used, why that isn't just a matter for self-cleanup. WP:DIY applies here. If Elaine isn't notable, that's similarly a matter for a merge discussion, not a GAR. ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ (ᴛ) 18:30, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
- It currently fails "broad on its coverage", which means that some of the content should be incorporated at the articld. There are also some unsourced statements. GreenishPickle! (🔔) 22:10, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
- Again, I don't see how it is not sufficiently broad. It encompasses all games she appeared in and has development information. GAR is not minor cleanup, it is for fundamental problems with the article that are difficult to fix without a rewrite. (And as far as unsourced statements go, they can just be deleted). ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ (ᴛ) 08:55, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- + It also needs some updates. So just for that, I don't believe the article's issue is still "minor". I think I'm just gonna go ahead and let WP:VG peeps know GAR stuffs. GreenishPickle! (🔔) 09:00, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- As a side note, I did notice that literally half the article was removed without reason, making it appear a lot more lacking in content than it would be. I reverted the change, which was given an incorrect justification (not "self-published", but sourced to quotes from the game itself, as shown in References). ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ (ᴛ) 09:04, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- Oh wow, didn't notice that one. Thats a huge difference, just for that I think the article has only minor issue and just for that I am closing this GAR. Thanks for looking at it. GreenishPickle! (🔔) 09:07, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- Again, I don't see how it is not sufficiently broad. It encompasses all games she appeared in and has development information. GAR is not minor cleanup, it is for fundamental problems with the article that are difficult to fix without a rewrite. (And as far as unsourced statements go, they can just be deleted). ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ (ᴛ) 08:55, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
- It currently fails "broad on its coverage", which means that some of the content should be incorporated at the articld. There are also some unsourced statements. GreenishPickle! (🔔) 22:10, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
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