Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Beholder (horse)/1
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The "Breeding career" section is unsourced and reads like a list because there are multiple one-sentence paragraphs. The lead does not summarise all major aspects of the article as "Backgound" and "Breeding career" information is missing. Z1720 (talk) 14:17, 21 November 2024 (UTC)
- Looks like scads of cruft has been added since the GAN.[1] Will do a simple revert for now. Montanabw(talk) 18:44, 21 November 2024 (UTC)
- Follow up did some extensive cleanup to remove the fancruft. Look better now? Montanabw(talk) 18:59, 21 November 2024 (UTC).
- @Montanabw: It looks much better. Was any of the removed information important information to keep for completeness? Z1720 (talk) 19:06, 21 November 2024 (UTC)
- Also, is there any post-2016 information to add to the article? Z1720 (talk) 19:07, 21 November 2024 (UTC)