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Timeline of the 2020 Pacific hurricane season

Featured list candidates/Timeline of the 2020 Pacific hurricane season/archive1

Nominator(s): TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 01:21, 24 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

This article contains the timeline of all tropical cyclones during the 2020 Pacific hurricane season. Thank you in advance for your review. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 01:21, 24 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Image review from Kavyansh — Pass

The infobox image can take ALT text
File:2020 Pacific hurricane season summary map.png — It says that "This file may be updated to reflect new information."
All the own work images are fine, thanks to FleurDeOdile.
- Pass for image review. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:49, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Kavyansh

"The season officially started on May 15" — What does "officially" mean here? Who determines it?
"Accumulated Cyclone Energy" — our article does not capitalize it
"Four time zones are utilized in the basin ... and dissipations during the season." — I wonder is this information necessary for the lead? I'll move it to the "Timeline" section instead, just below that graph
"35 mph (55 km/h)" v. "111 miles per hour (179 km/h)" — be consistent on whether both units should be in abbreviation or not.
"of a kelvin wave" — our article capitalizes 'K'
"According to the NHC's protocol" — spell 'NHC'
That is it; nice work! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:40, 24 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Kavyansh.Singh, I have addressed your comments. Thanks. :) TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 03:26, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I see that image review comments are not addressed; particularly that does File:2020 Pacific hurricane season summary map.png needs to be updated? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 07:18, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Whoops sorry Kavyansh.Singh, I completely forgot about that part. Added alt text to the season track map. The file itself does not need to be updated at this point--all data is finalized. That notice is just there to encompass the time before seasonal data is finalized (which occurs a few months after the season ends). TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 18:47, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
No issues. Looks good; Supporting! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:49, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"in the Central Pacific—the region between the International Date Line and 140°W, and ended" - the clause starts with a dash but ends with a hyphen
"The season officially started on May 15 [....] The season began with the formation of Tropical Depression One-E, which developed on April 25" - do these two sentences not contradict each other......?
That's all I got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:38, 31 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hi, ChrisTheDude, I believe I have addressed these comments. Thanks for the review! TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 21:28, 31 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:24, 1 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

CommentsSupport from TRM

Funny, I would think we could link Pacific Ocean in the lead as that's a principle component of the context of the list.
"eastern Pacific Ocean" vs "Eastern Pacific basin" Eastern/eastern? In the latter case, the Eastern, if part of the formal name, really ought to be inside the pipe.
It's only just struck me after all these years that it's odd calling it a "hurricane" season when it's all about "tropical cyclones". I think a footnote would be useful explaining that these are (in this case) synonymous, because where I'm from, we have the odd hurricane, but that's never a "tropical cyclone"...
"four. Accumulated Cyclone Energy, an index" our article doesn't over-capitalise this.
"Baja California Peninsula" our article doesn't capitalise peninsula.
"e Madden–Julian Oscillation " likewise "oscillation".

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:52, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the delay, The Rambling Man, I have addressed these comments. Thank you. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 20:43, 1 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

No worries. Support from me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:57, 28 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

AK

Disclaimer: I haven't checked references and will be claiming credit at the Wikicup.
Added some links, but I can't find anything else to grouse about, so a support from me. AryKun (talk) 13:15, 27 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Source review – The references used are reliable and well-formatted across the board, and no dead links were detected by the link-checker tool. The source review has been passed. Giants2008 (Talk) 01:12, 4 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:08, 8 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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