Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/NME's Cool List/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by Giants2008 10:01, 11 November 2013 (UTC) [1].[reply]
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- Nominator(s): A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 20:22, 21 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because I feel that it is of sufficient quality. I believe that this article meets the necessary FL criteria, and I welcome any comments about ways in which it could be improved. Thanks very much! A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 20:22, 21 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from SchroCat (talk) 13:11, 20 October 2013 (UTC)[reply] |
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*"Jack White, lead singer": a US or journalistic error – this should be "the lead singer". There should be a definite article before all such descriptors. (You have it a few times below as well, such as "Alex Turner, lead singer", "Beth Ditto, lead singer", and others).
Cheers - SchroCat (talk) 04:14, 15 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you very much for the review, SchroCat! A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 20:12, 18 October 2013 (UTC)[reply] |
Support: all good from me. Cheers - SchroCat (talk) 13:11, 20 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks, SchroCat! And thanks for catching those ones that I'd missed. A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 13:35, 20 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Lemonade51 (talk) 23:49, 8 November 2013 (UTC)[reply] |
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Support Lemonade51 (talk) 23:49, 8 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you very much! A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 23:53, 8 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Support - I can see little to suggest save the following tweaks. Ben MacDui 18:36, 9 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- "mega-watt" - This is per the source but I think you could add <!-- sic --> to the text as it seems to have the same meaning as megawatt and looks like a typo to anyone familiar with the scientific term.
- Having reread MOS:QUOTE, it appears that "trivial spelling and typographic errors should simply be corrected without comment", so I've just changed "mega-watt" to "megawatt".
- "a combined age of 1,389" I don't think it breaches our OR restrictions to divide one number with another and tell us that the average was more than 27.5 as this would be a more meaningful statement.
- Per WP:CALC, it would seem that you're correct. I have added a parenthetical comment stating that each person was aged approximately 28.
- Cite 19 about Frank Carter's planned tattoo won't open for me but I don't have a good internet connection and Checklinks seems to think it's OK. I presume if you knew whether or not he actually did it that you'd include this information.
- Agh, every XFM link has gone down. They have now all been fixed.
- Ladyhawke links to the wrong article.
- Corrected. Thank you very much for the review, Ben! A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 19:04, 9 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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