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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

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List of Stanley Cup champions

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Here's one I've been thinking of working on for a while but never got around to it. A couple of notes. For the Challenge Cup games (1893-1914) I've decided to just list the cup winners and leave the specifics to the List of Stanley Cup Challenge Games. It is a complex history, and I felt that List of Stanley Cup Challenge Games would have more room to give full explanations. As well, I decided not to model the table after the List of Grey Cup champions ( team | score - score |team ) because in one year there was a tie, and this table also lists the coaches, so having the score format that way would be a bit more confusing.

Anyway, all concerns and comments are welcome and I will do my best to address them. -- Scorpion0422 19:52, 18 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Reject The part that was removed also removed the winners per league season. The Challenge Cup article details the challenge games, not the league championships, which counted also. The section removed also listed the winning goal scorers. Alaney2k (talk) 21:16, 18 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, I readded the tables. -- Scorpion0422 02:32, 19 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Approve Thanks. I noticed that you removed the other table. That is the right decision. It's only importance was the listing of 'other' challenge winners for those years. But the table can go in the List of Challenge Cup article. You see, the 'others' count as Stanley Cup champs too, but the 'Full Chronology' covers it. I think the 'Full Chronology' heading is probably un-necessary now. Alaney2k (talk) 14:50, 19 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - I do think that what you and others have done to improve the list is good work. I don't want to convey any other impression. Just the table I felt was important. Alaney2k (talk) 14:53, 19 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comments
    • I think the lead needs more references.
    • The lead mentions the Conn Smythe trophy, but I can't see any reference to it below.
    • The scores in the Challenge Cup era ought to be unspaced to be consistent with the game scores later on.
      •  Done
    • I think the playoff formats should be changed to "1926–27 to 1927–28" etc, just to make it look clearer.
      •  Done
    • Why are some names in square brackets in the references? Peanut4 (talk) 03:24, 24 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose—Prose unclear and faulty in places; formatting queries; ToC query.
  • I've straightened out the opening to avoid rep. Is it OK to shift the scope statement "including finalists and challengers" to the end of the lead, as I've done? Being ignorant of the topic, I need to ask whether the list comprises only "finalists and challengers": if so, please use "comprises", not "includes" (which indicates there are other categories—and if there are other categories, can we be told what they are?).
  • Structure: Why the second-level title "Champions", when that is all there is. Why not move the current third-level headings up to second level?
  • I find it odd that tables are not numbered, as in most genres. (Not actionable, of course – just a comment.)
  • Sorry to be a pest, but there are ?five lists; do we really call it singular "List of ..." in that case?
  • Table 1: Missing comma fifth row
  • Tables 2–4: is it possible to re-jig the width of the columns so that the full dates don't break in Column 1? I had to widen my window hugely to make them continuous; since all entries in the rightmost column break (rather than some), you might consider robbing from it to pay for the first width. This is not an issue in Table 5.
  • All column titles should be in sentence case, not title case, shouldn't they?
  • "There are two seasons that the Stanley Cup has not been awarded: during the 1918–19 season because of a Spanish flu epidemic and 2004–05 because of the NHL lockout."—"seasons during which"? Then remove "during" after the colon. Commas might go after "season", epidemic", and express the 2004–05 season using the same wording as for the other.
  • "the trophy was an award for"—but no longer is? Unsure myself whether the subsequent attributions replace this role. Can you clarify?
    • It was originally for the top amateur team, now its for professional teams, and the subsequent sentences do explain it. I have done some minor rewording of that part. -- Scorpion0422 15:01, 7 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • I haven't looked at the rest of the prose, but it surely needs copy-editing. TONY (talk) 10:46, 7 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Table numbering issue: maybe I'm just too new here, and it's not regarded as useful; I was wondering why tables are not headed "Table 1", "Table 2", etc. for ease of identification, possible referral in the main text, etc. It's a general question that I'm asking here, simply because as a reviewer I wanted to refer to the tables here somehow. TONY (talk) 15:41, 7 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, now I get you. There aren't any (that I know of) FLs that do that. The tables are all under seperate headings, so you could use that as their title. -- Scorpion0422 16:03, 8 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I agree. It's not done in FL List of Super Bowl champions, which is the most comparable. I don't know of any articles on Wikipedia that do number the tables like you suggest. Alaney2k (talk) 16:07, 8 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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