Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of National Treasures of Japan (paintings)/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was not promoted by The Rambling Man 18:27, 26 December 2009 [1].
- Nominator(s): bamse (talk) 00:06, 11 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Featured list candidates/List of National Treasures of Japan (paintings)/archive1
- Featured list candidates/List of National Treasures of Japan (paintings)/archive2
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I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it satisfies all criteria of a featured list and presents a valuable contribution to wikipedia. The list is modeled after the featured List of National Treasures of Japan (sculptures). bamse (talk) 00:06, 11 November 2009 (UTC) [reply]
Resolved comments from Diaa
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1.The lead needs a thorough copy edit. Try to read it carefully again and fix any stylistic problems...--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 09:07, 13 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
2.Two sentences behind each other have the same beginning: "With the rise of" and "With the evolution" try to avoid that.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 09:07, 13 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
3.I think an introduction to the lead would be better instead of just going into the history of painting in Japan. Try describing in general the inclusion criteria and the paintings found in this list.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 09:07, 13 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
4.For the headers: "Author" should be changed to "Artist" and "Pictures" should be changed to "Image"--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 09:07, 13 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
5.No need for "A picture of " in the Name.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 09:07, 13 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
6.Why do some paintings miss their images? Like "Mandala of the Two Realms " which can be imported from here and here? Images of paintings who's author died are in the public domain even if you didn't take the image yourself. Please try to fill the missing images.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 09:07, 13 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
1.In the references you have sometimes multiple external links of the same subject like in " "National Treasure: Wind and Rain Landscape Painting; Attributed to Ma Yuan (国宝 風雨山水図 伝馬遠筆?)" (in Japanese). Seikado Bunko Art Museum, Introduction to Items in the Collection. http://www.seikado.or.jp/sub030102.htm. Retrieved 2009-05-18." --Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 11:21, 13 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
2.Wikilink publishers with articles like " Tokyo National Museum" and Washington State University.
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- Support the list is of high quality and shows great effort.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 13:48, 13 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Info: I added "Snowclad houses in the night" which was designated very recently to the list. The list is now complete again. bamse (talk) 11:44, 30 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 04:52, 6 December 2009 (UTC)[reply] |
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". Fixed. bamse (talk) 22:21, 5 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The Rambling Man (talk) 15:56, 5 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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Quick comments –
- "the paintings of the Momoyama period was characterised" should be "were characterised" for proper grammar.
- Fixed. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 04:44, 11 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- For me, the maps to the right of the Statistics table are cutting off the list on the right (I'm on Internet Explorer, in case that helps diagnose the problem).
- Fixed. At least on my Internet Explorer it does not cover the maps anymore. Please let me know if you still experience the problem and if yes, which of the tables is interfering with the map and on what resolution you are.
- Change header in Usage table from Present Location to Present location, because the second word is not a proper noun.
- Done.bamse (talk) 09:53, 11 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Usually, bibliographies are in alphabetical order. What system are you using here? Giants2008 (27 and counting) 03:19, 11 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I used random order :-). Fixed now. bamse (talk) 09:53, 11 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your comments. I think I addressed all of them.bamse (talk) 17:36, 11 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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