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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:Scorpion0422 22:30, 2 December 2008 [1].

List of Gantz chapters

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I have nominated this list to FLC after having a peer review, and comments from the wikiproject manga and anime, saying it was easy to understand. The summaries were copy-edited after being written and the references are reliable sources. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 16:12, 20 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support: I reviewed the list before it was nominated. Since then, all my issues have been resolved. -- Goodraise (talk) 09:52, 22 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 18:28, 24 November 2008 (UTC) [reply]
Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)

Oppose from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs) There are just too many prose issues; this is from the first two episode summaries alone:

  • "they have to kill a little creature, apparently an alien, in order to survive."
  • "The tall alien attacks Kato making him fall from a a bridge and finds Kurono and Kishimoto." Comma after Kato.
  • "After that another teenager named Joichiro Nishi, who was among the other people from the building kills the alien." Comma after "building".
  • "With the alien's death every person who survived return to the building."-->After the alien's death, the survivors return to the building.
  • "The ones who return are Kurono, Kishimoto, Nishi and Kato whose injures are healed." Comma after "Kato"
  • "The ball Gantz displays a score with the points of the ones who returned." Unclear. What displays the score?

I will try to help copy-edit if I can. Dabomb87 (talk) 16:02, 23 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done the fixes showed.Tintor2 (talk) 16:24, 23 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I copy-edited the first five chapters, make sure to address the inline comments I put in. Dabomb87 (talk) 16:42, 23 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Thanks.Tintor2 (talk) 16:46, 23 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Done 6–10, more inlines to address. I will have to do more copy-editing later, I have other things to do now. Dabomb87 (talk) 17:03, 23 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Done.Tintor2 (talk) 17:49, 23 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Done 11–15. Dabomb87 (talk) 15:44, 24 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Done.Tintor2 (talk) 15:47, 24 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Done up to 21. I have something to do but will be back in about 30–40 minutes or so. Dabomb87 (talk) 15:59, 24 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Done.Tintor2 (talk) 16:44, 24 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done copy-editing. Also, per MOS, the titles of the references should not be all caps. Dabomb87 (talk) 17:10, 24 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done.Tintor2 (talk) 18:08, 24 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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