Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of D.Gray-man chapters/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by User:Matthewedwards 20:26, 11 October 2008 [1].

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List of D.Gray-man chapters

And here's another chapter list (well, I've only done four, so this one is a harder line to throw out. Damn you Gary for making me want to do short nomination statements! :p) sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 08:04, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

Comments - sources look good, links checked out with the link checker tool. Note I did not check the non-English sources. Ealdgyth - Talk 17:08, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 18:26, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

• Perhaps wikilink "Exorcist"?
  • Fixed. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 18:13, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
• "over one-hundred chapters" Per MOSNUM, one hundred should not be hyphenated.
  • Fixed. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 18:13, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
• "Viz serializes the chapters in their monthly manga anthology Shonen Jump Advanced, with the first chapter appearing on May 2, 2006."-->Viz serializes the chapters in their monthly manga anthology Shonen Jump Advanced; the first chapter appeared on May 2, 2006.
  • Fixed. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 18:13, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
• "Recovering from his last mission, Allen meets Bookman, the chronicler of the war between the Black Order and the Earl of Millennium, and his successor Lavi." While recovering from his last mission...
  • Fixed. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 18:13, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
• "Jasdevi leaves the crumbling room, but is attacked by a mannequin of blood, Krory's new technique." False contrast, "but"-->and.
  • Fixed. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 18:13, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
• "Fo, disguised as Allen, battles the Akuma to buy some time."
  • Fixed. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 18:13, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
• "Eliade attempts to kill Allen and Lavi to keep him at her side." Who is "him"? Dabomb87 (talk) 18:07, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
  • Think that's it. sephiroth bcr ^(converse) 18:13, 27 September 2008 (UTC)))

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