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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:Matthewedwards 19:38, 28 October 2008 [1].

List of Bleach episodes (season 7)

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Nominating another episode list. — sephiroth bcr (converse) 06:45, 14 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments - sources look okay, links checked out with the link checker tool. Note that I did not evaluate the non-English sources. Ealdgyth - Talk 13:00, 14 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 12:48, 15 October 2008 (UTC) [reply]
Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

  • "Four pieces of theme music are used for the episodes"—Try not to use the passive voice: "The episodes have four pieces of theme music". Fix this in all the other episode lists also.
  • "Karin Kurosaki meets Tōshirō Hitsugaya when she is playing soccer in the streets." Pipe link soccer to Association football to help our international readers.
  • "Karin discovers that older students are using a soccer field for practice during a time slot her team had booked." that her team had booked.
  • "Ikkaku's brutal training causes the majority of the team to quit"—"the majority of the team"-->most of the team or most of her teammates.
  • "To obtain more team members, Ikkaku asks his fellow Soul Reapers to participate in the kendo tournament." recruit instead of "obtain".
  • "The Soul Reapers easily defeat their opponents, and a hollow appears nearby, forcing them to leave in order to fight it." Split this sentence up, these are two quite different ideas.
  • "Hitsugaya utilizes a sneak attack with his bankai and defeats Luppi" "utilizes"-->uses, simpler.
  • "Ulquiorra Orihime twelve hours to say goodbye to one person," Missing a word.
  • "She comes close to kissing him but cannot bring herself to do it."-->She almost kisses him but cannot bring herself to do it.
  • "Ashido leads them out of the forest, and an attack by one of the remaining adjuchas collapses the passage, and Ashido leaves to fight the adjuchas." Too many "ands".

Dabomb87 (talk) 02:20, 15 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Think that's it. — sephiroth bcr (converse) 02:26, 15 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support, well sourced, lead is good, and summaries are of good length. I did not give them a thorough read, however, to avoid spoilers since this season is beyond the English manga release too. :P I would note, however, that the see also seems redundant to the template. Also, the Amazon links could be shortened up a little.-- Collectonian (talk · contribs) 00:25, 26 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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