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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:Matthewedwards 19:38, 28 October 2008 [1].

List of Bleach episodes (season 4)

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previous FLC (20:26, 11 October 2008)

Relisting nomination as the previous one did not garner enough participation. — sephiroth bcr (converse) 07:16, 12 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 00:53, 15 October 2008 (UTC) [reply]
Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

  • "Ichigo and the others begin final game against the modified souls." Missing a word.
  • "Ichigo maanages to break"—typo.
  • "The hospital room then floods with water, which are the dolls of unidentified Bount members." So water "are" the dolls of Bount members? Unclear.
  • "Ichinose, unbeknownst to be Kenpachi, has joined Kariya's Bounts." "unbeknownst"-->unknown. It's simpler.
  • "Dalk manages to ensnare Ichigo in a metal net, and Ichigo's inner hollow takes over his body, allowing him to defeat the doll easily. Ichigo manages to regain control of his body, and subsequently collapses from exhaustion." Repetition of "manages".
  • "Tenth division lieutenant Rangiku Matsumoto comes upon Chad, Ururu, and Noba battling with the Bount Sawatari." "comes upon"-->encounters.
  • "Rangiku uses herself as bait to lure Baura out of the ground, and he is attacked by Chad," I thought Rangiku was a female.
  • "Meanwhile, Ishida is visited by Nemu, who proceeds to attack Ishida in order to confirm that he has lost his powers."
  • "When Kariya thanks him, Ishida informs Kariya that he did so in order to defeat the Bount in Soul Society."

Dabomb87 (talk) 23:02, 13 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Think that's it. — sephiroth bcr (converse) 02:20, 14 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment, summaries all look good, brief but thorough, everything seems well sourced. Only minor comment is that the see also is redundant (becoming my common comment :P), and "This season, along with season five, is not an adaptation of the Bleach manga by Tite Kubo; the plot focuses on the introduction of the Bount, a race of humans that consume human souls to extend their lives, and their conflicts with Ichigo Kurosaki and his allies." this transition seems kind of off. It seems like it is an adaptation, just not a direct one? And should mention who did create the story, if its known. Then I'd think plot should be a separate sentence? -- Collectonian (talk · contribs) 00:21, 26 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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