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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was archived by SchroCat 10:19, 6 November 2014 [1].
List of Beyoncé live performances (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): I Am... ***D.D. 20:25, 5 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because... I believe it meets the required criteria. I Am... ***D.D. 20:25, 5 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from ThirdWard
- I'm not sure if "one-off concerts" in the infobox is the best wording. I assume you're combining the residency shows and the notable concerts, but obviously the residency shows were not one off concerts. It's not entirely clear.
- Beyoncé's first co-headlining The Verizon Ladies First Tour –-> This could be reworded, maybe "Beyoncé's first co-headlining venture, The Verizon Ladies First Tour..."
- The tour was overally praised by critics and Beyoncé along with Keys was particularly hailed for her elaborative performance and considered as the highlight of the shows –-> Try "The tour was generally praised by critics, with Beyoncé and Keys particularly being hailed for their elaborative performances."
- Remove "two days before Beyoncé's 26th birthday." in The Beyoncé Experience table
- the I Am... World Tour was a worldwide tour –-> "the I Am... World Tour was Beyoncé's second worldwide tour"
- US $119,5 million --> US $119.5 million (english period used to break up numbers)
- The tour is currently on track to become the second most successful tour of all time when looking at average gross revenue per show --> The tense of this might need to be changed now or very soon since the tour is over
- A live DVD of the show and a one-hour Thanksgiving television special aired on ABC News in late November 2009. --> Differentiate the DVD and the Thanksgiving special. Maybe just add "A live DVD of the show was released, and a one-hour..."
- After these minor changes I of course Support (Note I did significantly contribute to the lead in July, 2014) ThirdWard (Lolcakes25) (talk) 10:51, 16 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Everything adressed. I Am... ***D.D. 19:00, 17 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. – SchroCat (talk) 10:34, 6 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.