Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Arsenal F.C. seasons/archive2
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List of Arsenal F.C. seasons (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): Lemonade51 (talk) 21:30, 3 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Completing the set of Arsenal lists, this is a comprehensive account of the football seasons played by the club. It's the second time I've nominated this here, the first nomination stagnated and reviewers raised issues with sourcing. Since then I've expanded the lead and history sections, sorted out the table and tided up the referencing. A big thanks goes to club historian Andy Kelly who helped out with the line-ups in the smaller cup competitions. As ever feedback would be most appreciated. Lemonade51 (talk) 21:30, 3 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments by Mymis
- "by munition workers" -> link "munition"
- "The club later that year resigned from amateur governing bodies, the Kent County and London Football Association and voted to turn professional" -> I believe the comma is missing somewhere?
- En-dash (–) = An en-dash indicates that Arsenal did not participate -> maybe just "En-dash (–) = Arsenal did not participate"
- when you click on "Joy (1952)", it does not go the the full ref
- The Daily Telegraph, The Times, BBC Sport, The Independent nowhere linked
- www.rsssf.com is not needed
- UEFA.com -> UEFA
- ESPN FC -> ESPN FC
- theguardian.com -> The Guardian
- Article was published on the Guardian website, not in the newspaper. I've wikilinked the site now.
Mymis (talk) 23:30, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for taking a look @Mymis:, have made changes. Lemonade51 (talk) 00:03, 23 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
You have my support, great work! Mymis (talk)
- Comments by Struway2
An interesting article: I do approve of informative footnotes.
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- Can anything be done to narrow the unduly wide Community Shield column?
- Can't seem to do anything...
- Pity. Don't know what it looks like to the rest of you, but on my browser/screensize it's almost as wide as the Other comps column, in which Mercantile Credit Centenary Trophy wraps to one word per row. Leaving comment open just in case anyone has suggestions: not something I'd oppose on
- @Lemonade51: One more (sorry for the bitty nature of this review, I juat haven't got the concentration span I once had).
Can you sort the top goalscorers column such that the "n/a" cells don't come between the real names beginning with M and N.If it helps, once you've done this I will come back and support (and if I then notice anything else, I'll fix it myself if I can). Thank you for your patience. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 15:06, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Done! Thanks again for taking the time to review. Lemonade51 (talk) 16:23, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Support. This version of the list is much improved on the first nomination, both the prose and the referencing. As far as I can tell, the list does now satisfy the FL criteria. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 16:53, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- in 2003–04 when → in the 2003–04 season when
- Not done, having two 'seasons' in the same sentence would be repetitive.
- "In 1930, Arsenal beat Newcastle United to win its first major piece of silverware." - what was the silverware??
- 'year later; by the" → "year later and by the"
- Think it works better with semicolon
- "United in the Cup final" → "United in the FA Cup final" - Arsenal also competed in the 1979–80 Football League Cup so just saying "cup" is ambiguous
- "against Aston Villa" → "against Aston Villa in 2015"
— Nice list, i'm very close to supporting it. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 02:32, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for your comments @Yellow Dingo:, have addressed them. Lemonade51 (talk) 11:36, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Support good list from Lemonade51. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 05:50, 6 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 22:32, 7 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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