Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Cannibal Corpse discography

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:Scorpion0422 23:33, 29 July 2008 [1].

Cannibal Corpse discography

"The Time to Featured List Is Now". Cannibaloki 17:51, 20 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support: As always i'll support your nomination. Continue the good job on the metal articles and discographies. --Be Black Hole Sun (talk) 18:15, 20 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

A comment in 24 minutes, great! Realy thanks. Cannibaloki 18:47, 20 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Just a quick note - a support in 24 minutes with a comment such as "As always i'll support your nomination" is likely to result in your comments being discounted. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:32, 29 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support Tenacious D Fan (talk) 14:01, 27 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Be Black: I hope you don't mean that you review on the basis of who the nominator is. Please review critically in relation to the FL criteria. (Nothing against Cannibal, BTW). Tony (talk) 15:44, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
- The lead is terrible I'm afraid. Just some examples of the urgent need for a copyedit by a native English speaker...
  - " Followed by 1991's Butchered at Birth and 1992's Tomb of the Mutilated." is not a sentence
  - "After this album, the guitarist Bob Rusay leaving the band, as been replaced by Rob Barrett, who joined the group in time to appear as a club band in the Jim Carrey film Ace Ventura: Pet Detective." simply not English.
  - " In 1994 released " ??
  - "To take the post of frontman, was named George "Corpsegringer" Fisher, with whom the band released Vile in 1996, this was the first band's album to appear on the Billboard 200 chart, debuting at number 151." rephrase required.
  - "In the next album" On?
  - "Pat O'Brien came in place of Rob " ??
  - "the group's first live, video and CD titled " ??
  - "Gore Obsessed arrived in 2002, followed by the boxed set 15 Year Killing Spree a four–disc career retrospective, " arrived? not really, it was released. Probably need a comman after "spree" as well.
  - "Their currently release " current...
- Refs 2 & 3 need the correct publisher information (e.g. not French charts, but lescharts.com)
- ~~Two videos are missing directors.~~

Not done I can't find!

- "and already sold 2,100 copies " remove the already.
The Rambling Man (talk) 09:15, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done The fixes have been made, and mainly the copy edit.

Cannibaloki 00:30, 25 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments (blackngold29)
- "of Metal Blade Records, with whom signed a contract.." - should be "with whom they signed.."
- Try to stay away from "current", try "As of 2008, their latest release..."
- The Allmusic chart ref is fine, but why not use the official rankings?
  - See MOS:DISCOG
- Where's the rest of the Music video directors?
- Are you sure they didn't do something on the Mary Poppins soundtrack? ;) Looking good, Almost there. Black ngold29 05:02, 26 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - Done Minor fixes... Cannibaloki 06:19, 26 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    - Why did you hide the citations for the music video directors? Fix that and you have my support. Black ngold29 18:21, 26 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
      - Done The reference was taken from the new DVD, already that the previous two not contain the name of directors. Cannibaloki 18:39, 26 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support - Very nice. Black ngold29 18:42, 26 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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