Wikipedia:Featured article review/Ketuanan Melayu/archive1
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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.
The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 4:23, 5 March 2022 (UTC) [1].
- Notified: Johnleemk, WikiProject Southeast Asia, WikiProject Malaysia, WikiProject Discrimination, WikiProject Ethnic groups, 2021-12-01
Review section
[edit]I am nominating this featured article for review because the article needs to be updated with recent events; "update needed" banners have been in the article since August. There are also some uncited statements. Z1720 (talk) 15:55, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Had a wary eye on this article for awhile and am not sure whether I have time to dig into it myself, but through a quick search saw that there seem to be a reasonable number of more recent sources available, which presumably would cover more recent info if it is due. CMD (talk) 21:54, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Z1720, what’s the status? SandyGeorgia (Talk) 17:42, 24 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- @SandyGeorgia: The last edit to the article was Jan. 12, three days before I initiated this FAR. Problems still persist. I recommend a Move to FARC. Z1720 (talk) 17:43, 24 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Move to FARC per Z1720. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:33, 24 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Move to FARC, needed updating has not occurred. Hog Farm Talk 14:14, 26 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
FARC section
[edit]- Issues raised in the review section include sourcing and datedness. DrKay (talk) 17:06, 29 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist no edits to fix issues, still has cleanup banner (t · c) buidhe 19:44, 2 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- @Chipmunkdavis: I see that you added information to update the article on current happenings. Are you interested in updating this article? Z1720 (talk) 03:12, 8 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- I thought I'd at least slowly chip away at what is needed for the update tag (although it may ask a bit much to go all the way up to Ismail Sabri Yaakob). I can take a look at other issues too, depending on what sources I can get access to. CMD (talk) 03:30, 8 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- @Z1720: I have added coverage of the interaction of ketuanan Melayu with recent politics. (Not Ismail Sabri Yaakob though despite the tag, his rise was much more entwined with Covid-19.) While there is undoubtedly room to improve my work, I believe the substance of the tag requests have been fulfilled. I would appreciate third-party assessment of this. CMD (talk) 11:57, 16 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist, there is uncited text and original research throughout, and at almost 16,000 words, the article fails to use summary style. There is inconsistent citation (some page numbers in notes, some with rp). And oddly, a 16,000-word article is tagged as needing expansion. WP:MSH and MOS:BOLD attention needed. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 13:47, 19 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist - extremely bloated, uses a self-published source (Rashid), there is uncited text sprinkled throughout, and both the final paragraph of the Malaysian Malay section and the uncited note footnoted there may be original research. Hog Farm Talk 14:57, 2 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This removal candidate has been delisted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please leave the {{featured article review}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:23, 5 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.