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The article was archived by Laser brain via FACBot (talk) 22:02, 29 January 2016 [1].

True Detective (season 1)

Nominator(s): ðάπι (talk) 23:55, 15 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about the first season of HBO's anthology crime drama True Detective, which was created by Nic Pizzolatto and starred Matthew McConaughey, Woody Harrelson, Michelle Monaghan, Tory Kittles, and Michael Potts. Its story follows McConaughey (as detective Rustin Cohle) and Harrelson (as Martin Hart) and their pursuit of a serial killer over a seventeen year period. Having achieved GA status last August, further improvements have been made since, and I believe this article meets the FA criteria. This article has previously gone through FAC twice; unfortunately both nominations received minimal attention, and Ian Rose has waived the two-week waiting period for another nomination. Third time's the charm? DAP388 (talk) 23:55, 15 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from jfhutson

I thought this was pretty good television, despite the fact that I usually find McConaughey pretty annoying. Let's take a look at the article.

"The season's themes are masculinity and religion." I doubt this can be stated so unequivocally.
"with painstaking care" doesn't seem like an appropriate use of quotation. Unclear attribution.
"list of the "Ten of the Best"" too many definite articles.
"The season incorporates gospel and blues songs, which were selected by Pizzolatto and T Bone Burnett; the pair opposed the use of Cajun music and swamp blues for the season's musical score because "it's already been done so much"." I could be wrong, but this semicolon usage sounds weird to me. Why not a period? Another unclear quote attribution.
"Masculinity is an established trope" I think you're using "trope" as a synonym for "theme", which it is not. Look at how the Southern Spaces article uses the word.
There are lots of unattributed quotes in the Themes and influenced section. See Wikipedia:Quotations#General guidelines to see what I'm talking about. If you're using quotes because you think these are non-neutral opinion, tell me whose opinion. If you're stating facts, summarize where possible and eliminate the quotes.
The article focuses on pop culture sources (with one exception), which is probably fine for most shows, but I see at least four papers here that look like they deal with this show in depth. Have you looked at them to see what they might add?
There was a plagiarism scandal related to this show covered in reliable sources. I'm not saying you need to talk about it much because it looks bogus, but you could work in into the part about Ligotti.

--JFH (talk) 15:59, 18 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. --Laser brain (talk) 22:02, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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