Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Parinda/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The article was promoted by Laser brain via FACBot (talk) 24 July 2019 [1].
- Nominator(s): Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:49, 21 June 2019 (UTC)
My first tryst with a featured article. It is a comprehensive and well written account of one of the most important and significant Indian film. Constructive feedback's are welcomed. Thank you. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:49, 21 June 2019 (UTC)
Comments from Kailash
[edit]None really. I support this since my comments were addressed in the PR. --Kailash29792 (talk) 06:35, 21 June 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for the support Kailash. Cheers! Yashthepunisher (talk) 08:33, 21 June 2019 (UTC)
Support Comments from Aoba47
[edit]Addressed comments
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There is a lot of great work in this article, but I have concerns about the prose quality in the “Plot” section. Aoba47 (talk) 23:57, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
Thank you for your patience. Once my comments are addressed, I will be more than happy to support this for promotion. I hope you have a wonderful rest of your week. Aoba47 (talk) 21:59, 11 July 2019 (UTC)
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8Thank yo for addressing everything! I support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 19:18, 13 July 2019 (UTC)
Comments from Veera Narayana
[edit]Support — Not much to talk about. Majority of my concerns were done at the PR itself. I've made some minor changes in the plot. This is worth enough to be a FA IMO. Hence, i support the article's promotion. Veera Narayana 09:18, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you so much for the support Veera Narayana. Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:17, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
Sources review
[edit]- Spotchecks: A number carried out, identifying a few issues:
- Ref 19: Article says "The singer Shaan made his playback singing debut by singing one line for 'Kitni Hai Pyari Pyari'" Source says two lines. On the other hand, the source in ref 20 says one line, so who knows? Too trivial to worry about.
- I have tweaked this sentence. Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:10, 8 July 2019 (UTC)
- Ref 25: Article says "In a 2010 interview, film critic and Chopra's wife Anupama Chopra said, "there was so much buzz about Parinda before the release of the film": Source says "there was so much buzz about Parinda that I wanted to feature him". Quotes should exactly replicate what's in the source.
- Ref 38: Article says "British director Danny Boyle cited Parinda as one of the films that helped him understand Mumbai for his Academy Award-winning film Slumdog Millionaire (2008)". This information does not appear in the source, although Parinda is mentioned in general terms.
- Ref 52: Article says "The city in the film is shattered into "dark, morbid spaces with all the characters framed within a light and shadow zone".". I was unable to locate this quotation in the source.
- It's at page 71. Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:10, 8 July 2019 (UTC)
- Verifiability:
- Ref 26: Not sure what is being cited here
- This is a radio talk show where the director recites how he saw the audiences were unhappy with the film's climax. Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:10, 8 July 2019 (UTC)
- Links:
- Ref 11: if you're going to cite YouTube you need a link. See also 41
*I have used the AV media template that's doesn't require a link. Should I add it? Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:10, 8 July 2019 (UTC)
- Otherwise, all links to sources are working, per the checker tool
- Formats
- Ref 24 et al: ISBNs should be formatted uniformly. At present some are hyphenated, other not.
- "Further reading": this is not a list of optional further reading, it's a list of your book sources which, with one exception, you have fully itemised in your references. The exception is ref 5, Mehta. This should be brought into line with the others, and then eliminate the "further reading" list.
- Otherwise, formats OK
- Quality and reliability
- Ref 39: How do you access the source article? And what makes this a high quality reliable source?
- Replaced the source. Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:10, 8 July 2019 (UTC)
- Generally, the sources appear to be comprehensive, though I have no knowledge of some of the websites used. In the absence of comment from other reviwers, I am prepared to accept that they meet the required criteria for quality and reliability.
Brianboulton (talk) 16:39, 3 July 2019 (UTC)
- Brianboulton The rest have been fixed. Thank you. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:02, 9 July 2019 (UTC)
- Support: A very well written article. Mr. Smart LION 04:53, 11 July 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for the support Mr. Smart LION Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:00, 11 July 2019 (UTC)
- Support: I really don't see much of a fault in it, Yash. Its crisp and well-written. Good job. — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 05:53, 15 July 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for the support Ssven2. Yashthepunisher (talk) 10:47, 15 July 2019 (UTC)
- Support all looks good. Perhaps link "diffusion", but your call Jimfbleak - talk to me? 06:12, 20 July 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for the support Jimfbleak, I have wikilinked it. Yashthepunisher (talk) 11:54, 20 July 2019 (UTC)
Comments from Dharmadhyaksha
[edit]- You may use "all_lyrics" parameter in Template:Track listing or delete individual entries of all lyrics. Prose covers it already that they were written by Hallauri.
- If Shaan has sung "Kitni Hai Pyari Pyari", his name should be included in the table too against the song entry.
- Prose mentions there are two versions of "Kitni Hai Pyari Pyari", but table lists only one.
- Adding second version of "Kitni Hai Pyari Pyari" will make total 5 songs. Prose says they were 4.
- "Tum Se Milke" is based on Leo Sayer's 1977 single "When I Need You". What does "based on" mean? Lyrics? Music?
- "Parinda received the NFA for Nana Patekar". Or should it be "Patekar received NFA for Parinda"?
- Is the Best Film nominee the director or the production house? Our article Filmfare Award for Best Film lists Vinod Chopra Productions.
- Best Film Awards are given to producers. In this case, Chopra is the producer as well so his production company is listed in the nominees. Yashthepunisher (talk) 14:37, 22 July 2019 (UTC)
- If possible do mention what corresponding roles D'Onofrio, Yelchin and Marquette played. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 12:55, 22 July 2019 (UTC)
- Dharmadhyaksha Thank you for the comments. Yashthepunisher (talk) 14:37, 22 July 2019 (UTC)
- Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FAC/ar, and leave the {{featured article candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. --Laser brain (talk) 11:11, 24 July 2019 (UTC)
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