Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Oil phase-out in Sweden/archive1
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This article is about Sweden's announced intention to break their dependence on oil by the year 2020. So far oil supplies 32% of Sweden's energy needs and I think this would be a very interesting featured article. The article is well written and an encouraging note on this issue to many of us addicted to this commodity. FrummerThanThou 03:50, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Object. If we ignore the fact that there aren't any inline citations throughout the article, the article does not have enough depth. Why did Sweden decide to break their dependence on oil? The decision did not come out of thin air, didn't it? What were the political implications of such a move? What actions did the government take to implement its decision? Those are just a few questions that I see are unanswered in the article. Titoxd(?!?) 03:55, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Object per above. Not comprehensive, hardly any inline citations, stubby paragaphs, bloated See Also section. Might want to list this at peer review instead. Gzkn 03:58, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Object recommend to peer review. Sandy (Talk) 09:09, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Object, obviously, per above. "See also" is the biggest section of the article. -- Kicking222 14:19, 7 December 2006 (UTC)